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Indians vs. Aliens by Lance C. Hendrickson - Sci Fi, Fantasy, Action, Adventure - When extra-terrestrials attack, only Native Americans can save the Earth. 120 pages - pdf, format

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If a space shuttle is orbiting the Earth, I personally would just put EXT. SPACE as opposed to EXT. SPACE-DAY, as there is no day or night in orbit.
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It's not right making a judgement on just the first page.
When I get the time, I'll read this script and let you know my thoughts.
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I like the triangular formation obelisk landing at the start. May be a bit too wordy though. Reading the first 10 pages, it is clear that your going for the alien invasion parody angle, like Mars Attacks, in fact the president here reminds me of Jack Nicholson's president in Mars Attacks.

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