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Posted: August 4th, 2017, 4:28pm Report to Moderator
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A Dolly for Krampus by Doug J Robbins - Short, Horror - Sara Jo Conrad devises a plan to protect her naughty brother from the wrath of the Krampus.  2 pages - pdf, format

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Hi Doug,

No title page, no fade in, no capitalization of character introductions.

Your slugs are also written incorrectly. Should look more like this:

EXT: HOUSE - NIGHT

Not sure what the horror element was. This could just be a kids story.

I guess at its core it's a cute little story but definitely not for me.

Good luck with it.


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I'm sorry but I didn't like this at all. I don't even know what this is doing in the horror section. And you may as well, have just turned this into a short story, rather than a short script, as it's basically all just narration anyway.
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