Your logline makes this sound like just another run of the mill, been there done that, slasher flick... one that's been done to death. Are slashers even still a thing anymore? Haven't seen a new one in forever, sad too, they used to be my favorite... anyway I decided to check this out... and couldn't get past page 3, sorry... there were quite a bit of formatting/grammar issues, and well... yeah, not a good start for a reader, IMO... I'm sorry, though, best of luck man! |