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Posted: November 12th, 2017, 4:54pm Report to Moderator
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No Two Snowflakes by Jason Paul - Short, Thriller, Crime, Drama - A young woman looks back on her unique father-daughter relationship as she fights to escape tragedy in the wilderness. 17 pages - pdf, format

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I liked parts of this. That being said I found the story beat a bit repetitive (the back and forth from present to past so Crystal can demo each learned skill) and the action got really dense in the latter third - found myself skipping pages.

I did love the ending - very poignant.  


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