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LC
Posted: April 5th, 2018, 8:41am Report to Moderator
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Okay, you all don't find the Frecklebug a bit creepy, masquerading as sweet?

Marks for pure originality, but on film this would be... downright creepy!


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There is such a fine line between cute, creepy, comedy, horror, etc.

This is such a story.  It was written to be cute, but it could be horror if expanded upon.

Solid 4.

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Writer,

I like this one, too. Another story that seems there should be more to it. However, pretty decent as it is.

Steve


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I like the expanded version, but we still don't see the Frecklebug's purpose. Is it gathering some kind of energy from kids to power Some Necessary Thing, or maybe just defending her against bad dreams and it gets hungry while there, or something else entirely?

When something Mysterious is revealed at the very end of a story without any explanation of its purpose of what happens next, it just leaves a sinister vibe, and I don't think that was the effect you intended.


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Frecklebug has been optioned to be produced as an animated short.


Anthony Cawood - Award winning screenwriter
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Double congrats, Anthony.


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Ditto from me. Thought you'd been quiet lately, Anthony, but obviously still the quiet achiever even when AWOL. Congrats! Looking forward to seeing the animation.


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Thanks Warren/Libby

Busy family summer Libby, so been in lurker mode


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I wish there was more to this, theres so much more you can do with this. Im struggling with dialouge myself and didnt feel the dialouge was great in this, could be a very good story, just needs a bit more.
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Hey Liam, this was done for a One Week challenge on here, requirement was for 1 page story... so this version is expanded a little


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