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Frecklebug - WT (currently 2895 views)
LC
Posted: April 5th, 2018, 8:41am
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Okay, you all don't find the Frecklebug a bit creepy, masquerading as sweet? Marks for pure originality, but on film this would be... downright creepy!
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DanC
Posted: April 5th, 2018, 1:11pm
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There is such a fine line between cute, creepy, comedy, horror, etc. This is such a story. It was written to be cute, but it could be horror if expanded upon. Solid 4. Dan
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SAC
Posted: April 5th, 2018, 8:48pm
Of The Ancients
… but some dreams do
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Writer, I like this one, too. Another story that seems there should be more to it. However, pretty decent as it is. Steve
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FrankM
Posted: April 25th, 2018, 10:41pm
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I like the expanded version, but we still don't see the Frecklebug's purpose. Is it gathering some kind of energy from kids to power Some Necessary Thing, or maybe just defending her against bad dreams and it gets hungry while there, or something else entirely? When something Mysterious is revealed at the very end of a story without any explanation of its purpose of what happens next, it just leaves a sinister vibe, and I don't think that was the effect you intended.
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AnthonyCawood
Posted: September 4th, 2019, 4:20pm
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Frecklebug has been optioned to be produced as an animated short.
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Warren
Posted: September 4th, 2019, 10:29pm
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A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
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Double congrats, Anthony.
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LC
Posted: September 4th, 2019, 10:34pm
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Ditto from me. Thought you'd been quiet lately, Anthony, but obviously still the quiet achiever even when AWOL. Congrats! Looking forward to seeing the animation.
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AnthonyCawood
Posted: September 5th, 2019, 1:30am
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Thanks Warren/Libby
Busy family summer Libby, so been in lurker mode
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LiamX
Posted: October 3rd, 2019, 1:57am
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I wish there was more to this, theres so much more you can do with this. Im struggling with dialouge myself and didnt feel the dialouge was great in this, could be a very good story, just needs a bit more.
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AnthonyCawood
Posted: October 3rd, 2019, 9:02am
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Hey Liam, this was done for a One Week challenge on here, requirement was for 1 page story... so this version is expanded a little
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