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Posted: May 19th, 2018, 7:53am Report to Moderator
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The Good Place by Kalycia - Series, Comedy - Judge Gen makes Michael apart of the experiment to test if he, like the others, might have become a better person after death. 29 pages - pdf format

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You have the humor down. As for the story its engaging enough that I wanted to keep reading.

Some moments did feel a little too long and started becoming boring with all the dialogue.

But overall is a good strong script.
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