Arrival by Steven J. Fauquier - Thriller - After crashing into the woods in a small airplane, a confused, dyslexic man ventures out into a strange town three years later. As he is constantly faced with the harsh reality that he is not wanted, he begins to realize that certain people will do anything to get rid of him. From the weak signal of the radio to the static of his telephone calls, his connection to the rest of the world is being cut...and the conclusion he arrives at is wholly unexpected. - html format.

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As soon as I read dyslexic I knew the twist. Really it's pretty damn obvious, you should make it less so.

I liked the phone conversations, that was a unique twist.
I liked the cancer idea, how they were all cures symbolically.

A little more substance wouldn't have hurt. Why is the guy in a coma? People dieing from lung cancer are mostly fully awake.

But it's a first draft so I'll let that go.

You got the format down and I could easily visualise everything. Good job on that.

By the way, will you even be reading this?