Hi Ziggy. Yeah, I think it would work pretty well. Looking over it I have spotted some trivial errors, which have now been corrected on my newer version. Still, this is pretty good I think for a sequel that probably won't ever get made. Still, if anyone reads it, and likes it, then great. Can't say more than that really. Other than, if you do read it, I hope whoever does, enjoys it and can visualize the scenes as they read it. That's always the way I read a screenplay anyway. Well, if you're interested, check out my other efforts and let me know what you think. One things for sure, there is a hell of a lot of high potential and standard out there in simply scripts screenplay arena. That's for sure. And besides the odd mistakes we all make, none of us are losers, only winners. Take care - Joe. |