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Posted: September 11th, 2005, 5:54am Report to Moderator
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Anticipating Love by Natalie Zhivolup - Comedy - Duncan meets Lisa at the carnival of Venice. Unfortunately, she loses his phone number and from this time on his life turns into a constant attempt to find the girl. They both lead ordinary life - working, having fun with their friends and dating - without knowing that their soulmate lives right across the street. 106 pages - pdf, format


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Good work! To me you represented each character quite well. I would certainly love to turn "anticipating love" into a stage play.
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Posted: December 30th, 2005, 3:51pm Report to Moderator
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This was alright I guess.  The story was pretty decent on the whole, even though it was a hodgepodge of Serendipity/Under The Tuscan Sun/Cinderella.

I would suggest going back and cutting out some of the wordy descriptions and overinflated dialogue.


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