Cannibal Holocaust 3 by Ryan Perry - Horror - The horrific true story of a group of NYU students who disappeared during an expedition into the Brazilian rainforest in 1985. - html** format.

I think it was about a 7 and a half out of ten. nice job :)

I thought it was quite nice man.  I sat down yesterday and read it all.  Although I thought it was good I thought that it wouldent really mae much of a movie because the storyline is pretty much, group get captured then all get killed.  No real plot twists or anything invovled.  I did like it though mate.  Keep writing.

Bez

I really, really, really liked this script! GREAT writing.  Very detailed...some of your descriptions made me wince just reading them, and that is a good thing.  This is definitely a worthy companion to the original Cannibal Holocaust.  The shear brutality and uncaring attitudes of your cannibals makes the story just that much more disturbing.  I liked the characterization also, as I found myself liking many of the characters, such as the professor.  

Excellent job.  I would love to read more from you!

I liked it and don't get me wrong, I love brutal horror movies: Hostel, Texas Chainsaw Massacre, etc....  but this went a little too far to ever be made.  Regardless of how liberal an R rating is, you'll never be able to show a woman getting raped with a club or a baby removed from a pregnant woman, among other things.  It's great for the story, but if you want to get it made, I'd tone it down a bit.  Just my opinion.

For some sick reason...I liked this lol

Sure you have  alot of things that the MPAA would never allow but hey that's what directors cuts are for right?  ;D

Good dialouge, great formatting.

All in all a fun (if gory) read!

Good Job man!

this wasnt too bad... a lot of the torture and deaths were variations of stuff right out of the original Cannibal Holocaust... but i dont think you were ripping off the original, but paying tribute to it

i found some of the dialogue to be a bit "on the nose" nothing i a little bit of character development couldnt cure.

i'd like to see more character development for this.. or at least some diversity between the characters. after a while they all sort of blend together. if nothing else give them each a distinct personality.... something to diversify some of the minor characters.. or maybe a line of backstory just so that when they do die... we care.

other then that.... youve got something solid to think about expanding on and making better/.

I really liked this. It read very well, was nicely paced. The violence was way over the top. I can not see this ever being made though.

Kozileck, you may want to reconsider reading and commenting on old, inactive threads in the future.  In cases like this, the writer is not around to see your comments.  Digging up these old scripts only knocks newer scripts off the portal.

Just saying....


Phil

To make matters much worse, in the almost 8 years the script has been up, the writer never once responded to any feedback.