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Posted by: Don, September 18th, 2004, 9:53am
Undeclared: The Divorce by A. Monroe - Short, Drama, Comedy - A college student must come up with $800 in tuition money in 4 days.  - fdr format.

Undeclared: The Absent Minded Professer by A. Monroe - Short, Drama, Comedy - Scott's night out on the town leads him to an awkward meeting with his teacher, Professor Allen, and a surprise revelation that both men would like to forget. - html format.

Undeclared: Inverse the of Night by A. Monroe - Short, Drama, Comedy - Multiple story's intertwine on an average college Friday night of partying and drinking. UNDECLARED follows the lives of a group of college kids all connected to one foul dude named Scott. - html format.

Undeclared by A. Monroe - Comedy, Dark Comedy - Five stories interwoven around 4 college friends: Nia, an all around party girl; Nate, an enterprising business man looking to take advantage of the excellent opportunity college life present; Scott, the definition of a bastard; and Tawny, who actually is here for an education. Money, sex, drugs, and some education... Undeclared, just your normal college experience.136 pages - htm, format 8)

Posted by: chism, September 29th, 2004, 6:01am; Reply: 1
I actually think these things are pretty good. Yes, they're very short, but what's there is great! I really hate sequels, but sometimes you just need them. So I just think you should do a sequel to "The Absent Minded Professor" because I really wanna know what the hell happens to Prof. Allen and Scott, with the cops and everything.

I really like these things, they're like the first act of an episode of the O.C. and I love that show (who doesn't). I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Posted by: chism, September 30th, 2004, 3:16am; Reply: 2
After reading the third one, my suggestion to you is write however many more you're planning to write and take every chapter and put them into one story in a mish-mashed order. It'd be the "Pulp Fiction" of the twenty- first century. Most of these stories don't make a scrap of sense unless you've read another one so it would be really interesting to see what it would turn out like.
Posted by: AM (Guest), October 1st, 2004, 8:22pm; Reply: 3
Actually, that's not a bad idea. I write shorts as an exercise when I start a new project after a long break. But it would be cool to do a full length script just for the fun of it.
Posted by: chism, October 3rd, 2004, 2:57am; Reply: 4
Thank you. I have them sometimes... not very many times, but sometimes...
Posted by: Herodreamer79, March 25th, 2006, 2:32am; Reply: 5
i really really liked these... i hope you do more with these characters...i'd really like to see what happens to Tawny and Oscar after their "encouter" in the library...or how many more ridiculous situations B-boy and The freshmen can get themselves into and out of.

Scott and Nia always seem to end up coming back to eachother... makes me wonder if there is more between these two then either of them would like to admit
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