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Posted by: Don, October 13th, 2005, 11:11am
The President's unexplained visit to the trailer park by Daniel J. Toemta (Alfred Hitchcock) - Comedy - Three stories that takes place in a trailer park. For some reason the President of the united states is out for a drive in the countryside. He finally arrives at a trailer park. Alex has just gotten back from his vacation but when he comes back he finds out he has been robbed. And three adolescents who are trying to make a documentary about birds. - rtf, format 8)
Posted by: Alfred Hitchcock, October 13th, 2005, 12:03pm; Reply: 1
Hello.

I'm the writer of The Presidents unexplained visit to the trailer park. This is my first script here at Simplyscripts. I got the idea for it one night when i was watching Seinfeld and i wrote out the rough draft in like 5 hours. I hope you enjoyed reading it and i'm looking forward to hearing what you thought of it.
Posted by: MidnightGiant, October 16th, 2005, 11:13pm; Reply: 2
Whaaaaaat the hell was that all about?

The only thing that was funny as the last job.  Pretty good way to end it.  Considering nothing else made sense or was funny.

Sorry to be harsh.. but meh.
Posted by: Alfred Hitchcock, November 20th, 2005, 12:08am; Reply: 3
Really? Nothing else was at least a bit funny?
Posted by: -Ben-, November 20th, 2005, 2:11am; Reply: 4
I might read it...but im kinda not really wanting too, since you couldn't bother to type the title in with caps of reach ne wword....duh!
Posted by: Alfred Hitchcock, December 1st, 2005, 7:26pm; Reply: 5
man what a let down.

this was practicly the first script i ever finished into a final format and no one is even replying.
Posted by: bert, December 1st, 2005, 8:23pm; Reply: 6
How many scripts have you read and commented on, Hitch?

It's a two-way street.
Posted by: dogglebe (Guest), December 1st, 2005, 10:01pm; Reply: 7

Quoted from -Ben-
I might read it...but im kinda not really wanting too, since you couldn't bother to type the title in with caps of reach ne wword....duh!


I'm going to have to avoid reading anything you write because you seem so illiterate when you post.


Phil
Posted by: Alfred Hitchcock, December 1st, 2005, 10:27pm; Reply: 8

Quoted from bert
How many scripts have you read and commented on, Hitch?

It's a two-way street.


one. i really should read some more.
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