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Posted by: Don, September 17th, 2006, 2:51pm
The Award Goes To… by Helio J Corderio - Short - Not just the universe and Hollywood is flooded by lots of stars, heads beaten as well! 14 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Mr.Z, September 17th, 2006, 3:22pm; Reply: 1

Quoted from Don
by Helio J Corderio


Is that really necessary, Don?  ;D

Another crazy addition to your collection, Helio my friend. Can't bust you about anything because I feel like this short accomplishes everything that it intends to. Nothing more, nothing less.

Gotta love the simply cameos, those were the highlights of this one.  8)

Posted by: Helio, September 18th, 2006, 6:14am; Reply: 2
Hey Don, maby my new name "Corderio" is a type of numerology's thing that can bring me luck!

Z, my amigo, I'd like to say in public thank for your great help with this piece. The simply cameos are ever the highlights everywhere they appear.
Posted by: michel, September 21st, 2006, 2:09am; Reply: 3
Mon ami Helio,

just one thing to say "We love you, nuts".

Michel 8)
Posted by: rpedro, September 21st, 2006, 5:00am; Reply: 4
funny thing!

I'm liking the adventures of those lizards! :D :D

keep on going! :-)
Posted by: dogglebe (Guest), September 21st, 2006, 8:18am; Reply: 5
I didn't think this was one of your better pieces, Helio.  You just dropped a bunch of names into a script.  It just didn't go anyway.


Phil
Posted by: Helio, September 21st, 2006, 10:16am; Reply: 6
Thanks guys for the reading!

Phil, I know that, but I'm trying to build these two character better than I did until now. Something deep and strong and of course funny can will come soon starred by them. Thanks for your time on it.
Posted by: dogglebe (Guest), September 21st, 2006, 10:41am; Reply: 7
That's funny.  I'm doing the same thing with Bad Penguin


Phil
Posted by: Helio, September 21st, 2006, 10:56am; Reply: 8
Kevain & Thon meet Bad Penguin!
Posted by: dogglebe (Guest), September 21st, 2006, 11:15am; Reply: 9
Bad Penguin meets Kevin and Thon!


Phil
Posted by: Shelton, September 21st, 2006, 11:23am; Reply: 10
Posted by: Helio, September 21st, 2006, 11:39am; Reply: 11
very funny!

Have you watched a cartoon by Nick Park, creator of Wallace and Gromit, that Gromit save the crown jewels from  an expert thief penguin? But, I'm afraid I don't know where you can watch it, Phil. I copied it to jurassic oldest VHS from BBC, when I lived in London times ago. I'm not sure it is part of " A Grand Day Out" or "The wrong Trousers"

That short story was very funny and amusing short movie!
Posted by: dogglebe (Guest), September 21st, 2006, 12:05pm; Reply: 12
I've seen it, Helio.  I try to catch all the Wallace and Gromit shows.


Phil
Posted by: Helio, September 21st, 2006, 12:50pm; Reply: 13
I'm thinking to run off the stile very comom in the couple stories that show in some of them characters like: a shine and the extrovert, a quiet and agitated, a responsable and a inconsistent, a ascquiecent and astubborned  and so on.

To run off these options is very dificult, maybe to creat just one character seems to be more easy to build than two without to fall into these options I've mentioned.
Posted by: tomson (Guest), September 22nd, 2006, 9:35pm; Reply: 14

Quoted from dogglebe
I didn't think this was one of your better pieces, Helio.  You just dropped a bunch of names into a script.

Yeah, but one of them was mine!
That means this is an instant classic!

Hey Helio,
I like how you take the two lizards and further the story.

Now they (Kevain and Thon) have a writer and they are excited about the possibilities.

Kevain is dreaming the ultimate dream of success.
(I noticed he looked at Brea's ass and not mine  :P)
Then it's back to reality!

I think you did well expanding the story and the way I see it, it could become a very interesting story as they experience the ins and outs of Hollywood.

;)

Posted by: Helio, September 22nd, 2006, 9:52pm; Reply: 15
Pia, thanks, darling!

Thon did not look at your a** because Kevain interruped him, otherwise the pervert lizard would look at yours too!

hollywood is a good place to be and of course it has zillion of things we have to gossip about.

These two green-yellow belly want to fly high and high. They do not rest until to get in the White House!
Posted by: Helio, May 31st, 2007, 7:56pm; Reply: 16
Hey, Zack, thanks man for the reading.

Yeah, maybe the best thing this story is makes all my SS's fellas happy when the have a look at it!
Posted by: Zack, May 31st, 2007, 7:58pm; Reply: 17
You always seem to make people happy Helio. You're just a happy person.
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