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Posted by: Don, May 25th, 2007, 5:52am
Eating What's Cooked by Jonathan Morales (shogun) - Short - A Young Family ends their day like they have for the past six years with dinner. Their seven year old boy is a free talking youngster, which sparks up the conversation of how much their son has learned from them. That conversation leads to another one about how maybe their lives are not so great but they still have to live with it. Deal With It. 8 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: yorkshireladdy, June 3rd, 2007, 1:59am; Reply: 1
Just a wild guess here, but is English a 2nd lang. for you?  I think it shows in your writing (aka the crappy translations/slang stuff in the dialog).  I also don't particularly understand your title?  Is it supposed to sound meaningful or simply strange?  And finally, what's with the one-setting throughout the entire 8 pages, only Tarantino movie could pull something like that off, despite your occasional funny lines.
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