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Posted by: alffy, July 16th, 2007, 10:03am
I'll try to explain best I can here guys.
Basically I won't to end one scene with noise, a thud, which leads to a similar sound opening the next scene.
At the moment I have,
Catherine closes the diary with a...
INT. BANK
...Slam as the shutters crash down, startling everyone.
I don't think this is correct format but I'm stuck for ideas here, any suggestions would be appreciated.
Posted by: George Willson, July 17th, 2007, 6:30pm; Reply: 1
Lose the ellipsis and capitalize SLAM and you've got it. Not a problem there.
Posted by: alffy, July 18th, 2007, 10:35am; Reply: 2
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