Quoted Text But, unfortunately, it turned out that my husband is unable to have kids. |
Quoted Text The first thing I noticed was that with your descriptions, you had more "-ing" verbs. |
Quoted Text So did Mrs. Winterton kill Abby's father just because Mrs. Winterton had a bad childhood? I don't fully understand why she killed him. To get satisfaction out of it? |
Quoted Text I'm pretty sure this was supposed to be read in another way, but I just thought that was funny. |
Quoted Text do people put milk in their tea? |
Quoted Text I'll have to look at that. Description is one of the things I think I need to work on. |
Quoted Text Okay. |
Quoted Text How can you have tea without milk? That's just... weird. |