Compuman by S. Ramlal - Sci Fi - A student makes a look alike on the computer. After being transported out of the computer, the Compuman wants to kill his maker. And the Compuman chases him, until a young boy makes him realize what he is doing. But then the maker starts chasing the Compuman, to destroy him. 129 pages - pdf, format 8)

Sorry but it's pretty unreadable. Grammatical errors. Bad, unspeakable dialogue. No sense of pace. I flipped through and saw it might get better towards the middle (although the part I landed on had the Compuman (horrible name) playing the whole "what are these terms, what do they mean" cliche) but it's just so messy that I can't get there.