The Evolution of Plymouth St. Cloud by Ed Vela - Short - Plymouth St. Cloud is a Broadway kid actor about to get his big break on the Left Coast in a big budget movie.  He meets with his old, Broadway agent, Sam Gura, at the crumbling theatre where Sam "discovered" Plymouth years before.  Nostalgia turns to bitterness though when the real reason for the meeting is revealed.  The loyal agent, who has been there through the tough times, is now to be fired to insure the boy's continued career growth.  13 pages - doc, format 8)

Nice short, Ed. The story was a pretty good one. One of the only suggestions I have (if this is intended for film) is that there is a lot of dialogue. I don't know how you would get a 13-year-old to memorize all of that dialogue, unless they wanted to just learn the ideas and go for a little improv. The Environment:Entertainment was a good vehicle for the set up. There were a few typos, you might want to go through and check for those. Not bad overall.