Office, The: Environmental Week by Mark Simborg - Series, Comedy - Michael gets caught using the wrong trash container and in response decides to host the first ever "Dunder Mifflin Environmental Week." 35 pages - fdr, format 8)

Hey Mark,

I really enjoyed this spec.

I even laughed out loud a few times during it. Very well written, and you definitely had the voices of the characters down.

There were some typos here and there and a couple of flat lines, but other than that I thought the pacing was really good and so was the comedic timing.

Was this just a spec for fun or are you entering it somewhere?

Hey,

Thanks for reading it! Glad you enjoyed it. In answer to your question: BOTH. So you if have time to point out the typos/flat lines, it would be a great help. If not, no worries. I'm just glad someone read it. I've actually revised it a bit since posting (putting it into proper Office format, among other things) and made it a little better (I hope).

Thanks.
Mark

Hey Mark,

No problem. Where are you entering it? If you have a deadline you're trying to meet I can try to do a spell check and everything for you as soon as possible.

Just let me know.

Derek

You know what -- actually, don't worry about it. I did a spell check and made some revisions and have to enter the thing pretty much today, so...it'll have to go in as is! Thank you for the help.

Mark

Hey, can you convert this to PDF so i can read it? I'm a huge fan of the office. Thanks.

Jeannpiere, generally people do not critique old scripts that no one's commented on after a few years. Many times, the author is not around so your comments will fall on deaf ears.


Phil