Waiting At The Bus Stop by Max Majernik (MaxMajMan) - Short - A little boy reflects on his life at the Bus Stop - htm, format 8)

This was heartbreaking. I liked it when Kenny would talk to himself to comfort him, and I think this is a great interpretaion of how a child of a drug addict and alchol is. I loved it. The 'happy place' thing he kept saying made me think,yeah, they feel happy. They do. And, then they dont when they come back. but they want to go to the 'happy place' again and again

this would make a great short film.

However, one part that bothered me was that Kenny kills himself, and that the police actually look for them

The timer on the bottom of the screen kinda reminded me of 'vantage point', but done better.

Wonderful script. I loved it