Fighting for Living by André Rodrigues - Short - It is a short script without dialogue that tells the story of John and Deborah work five days a week in the monthly salary is not enough to pay the debts essential. But this changes when John takes the idea of selling material of construction in the car park of a cemetery.  6 pages - pdf, format 8)

Hi André & Don,

The pop up for this pdf doesn't work.   The link needs to be fixed.

Javier

Quoted from jayrex Hi André & Don, The pop up for this pdf doesn't work.   The link needs to be fixed. Javier

The link is fixed.

Don

Hello André,

After reading your script I believe that English is not your mother tongue.  Your script has the feel of two people struggling to pay the bills.  You may want to concentrate on one bill and have a conversation between John and Deborah to work out a solution.

I would also suggest you write in your own language first.  I believe that you are Portuguese and ask you to learn how to write a script by reading Portuguese scripts.  And then come back after rewriting your script.

All the best.


Javier