The Retainer by Anthony Boyle - Drama - A criminal defense attorney deals with issues regarding his teenaged son, who is indebted to a violent drug dealer. 102 pages - pdf, format 8)

Thanks a lot for posting my script on this wonderful webpage, Don!  I appreciate it.  For anybody who reads the script, brutally honest feedback would be useful.  I would rather somebody tell me they thought it was terrible than lie to me and say they thought it was good if they didn't.  However, if you honestly thought it was good, please don't be afraid to say that either.  Furthermore, any ideas/suggestions are 100% welcome!  Thanks for reading!

I think you ought to change the ending. It's seems to wrap everything up to neatly.

Do you have any suggestions perhaps?  Because I kind of thought that it wrapped it up with a little bit of chaos.  I don't know, what do you think?