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Posted by: Don, March 11th, 2009, 7:31pm
Living Donor by Dunk Franklin - Comedy, Drama - A High School Counsellor has to convince his patients to commit suicide, so he can give their liver to his dying sister. 142 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: personnumber123864, June 22nd, 2009, 10:14am; Reply: 1
just finished the script over the weekend. liked it a lot. it's bittersweet. it hits home and it hits home hard. not sure it's a comedy but i'm not a big fan of pigeonholes anyway. plus there are some parts that are very funny.

at 143 pages it's long but i didn't feel the length since it moves along nicely and consistently. if it came down to it i think you could jettison the whole greg story line and not sacrifice much.

there's also a ton of type-o's (pun intended) but they can be fixed easily enough.

on the whole, though, it's a very well thought out, well constructed story and a very good script. congratulations on a job well done.
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