The Stratus BorQ by David L Jackson - Thriller - Blake is confronted with so many indifferences, from his relationship with his father, his attraction to Katie and the talents of his best friend, and to top it all off, an infestation that threatens the existence of women and the freewill of man, a different world he must adapt to or become part of it. - html, format 8)

David,

I have just skimmed this briefly and just want to let you know that there's no reason to put " " around dialogue, it sorta goes without saying, if you know what I mean?

Thanks, Could use all the feedback I can get.

For anyone who has taken the time to read this script I have made some major adjustments to plot and characters, eg. the spaceship is now a large towering old building and the explosive sequence has been changed to a boiler room entrapment. (Doc and Toric)
Trimmed back the ending to include a better wrap up.
Please feel free to add any other suggestions asap as I plan on production July 3rd.