Strictly Platonic by Evan Jones - Short, Comedy - A Fat and lazy man looking for romance puts a personal ad on Craig's List but uses his roommates picture instead of his own. A woman recognizes the roommate in public and asks him out on a date. The roommates accepts, but it isn't exactly what he expected. Madness and hilarity ensue. This script was written just for me and a few friends to film. I know the screen directions are not exactly what they should be, but the people who will film it know what I'm talking about. Read it and comment on the dialogue. 20 pages - pdf, format 8)

I realize there are spelling errors in this, but like I said in the description, it was written in one night for a group of my friends who plan to film it. Any feedback about the plot or the dialogue will be appreciated.

Evan

I see you're new to the site. So just to give you the heads up the golden rule here...You must read other peoples scripts and comment on them in exchange for reads and feedback on yer own.

Its only fair, you know. A sorta' "give and take" arrangement.

Hope to see you on the boards.

Col.