REV by Chad Carr (reason) - Short, Drama, Suspense - A convicted hacker and his friends devise a plan to steal from the Federal Reserve in an attempt to stop a secret society from creating a New World Order. 20 pages - pdf, format 8)

How is this any different to the script you have already posted on here? I took a glance at it and it seems to have all the same problems as the draft I already read and commented on. Clearly you took none of that on board so what is the point of posting this here again?

I don't know what's scarier here --

1.  You screenplay, riddled with a gaggle of amateur mistakes?

or

2.   That a "New World Order" could come into power in only 20 pages?

The decisions.

Needs more commas.  Also, this could work as a full movie script.  It was compelling, despite the typos.