Forget-Me-Not by Paul J. Williams - Short, Drama - A recently divorced man reflects on the loves and losses of his life. 5 pages - pdf, format 8)

Nice little story, but the constant scene changes were a bit distracting.

hey Paul, not bad but not too unique either. not all of the scene changes were necessary either - for example the scene where Dawn's teaching the kids. i think you can pretty much tell the same exact story without jerking the reader/viewer around so much. its hard for us to focus on one scene when the scenes are constantly changing. its also not as powerful at the end. so overall, a nice, cutesy read but also very cliched