Hex by Leon Segers (writerseger) - Horror - Viciously assaulted, due to a false accusation, a young man develops telekinetic powers, which he uses to get revenge against those that hurt him. 90 pages - pdf format

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pretty disturbing script got to about 30 to 40 pages but got bored it felt like a really long read for how far i was in and maybe you could tighten it up a bit the details were a lot to take in, make it shorter some how. i did like it but it got tiring i dont know about the whole psychic thing it seemed like it could hold up as a revenge flick by itself. but whateves.