The Elder Chronicles: Rise of the Hunter by David J McCann (mojomccann) - Sci Fi - One man must release the Elder within him and destroy the darkness which threatens humanity. 127 pages - pdf, format 8)

I was going to quote the one poster that said this was a good script, strong narrative, but in between reading the first 10 pages and my post, the comment disappeared!

Usually a one poster is a freind bumper who didn't really read the script.

However, in this case, I like the first 10 pages story wise. I don't like WE SEE all that much, so I had to get over that.

I still think the deleted poster was related somehow to the writer....

Thanks for the read, much appreciated.

I agree, currently removing the WE parts, and trimming it down a bit, will have the revision uploaded soon.

Mojo

It was myself who posted first!! Not too sure why it was removed but would like to state again i enjoyed the script. Good decent story.

Quoted from fatjesus83 It was myself who posted first!! Not too sure why it was removed but would like to state again i enjoyed the script. Good decent story.

It's great you enjoyed the script, but... give the writer some feedback, good or bad that will actually help him or her.  IYHO.  Statements like the one above,  does the writer no justice.

May I refer you to the below thread.  Pay attention too #1.

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-cc/m-1199036940/s-new/

Good Luck

Ghost