Encounter by V Srinivas (winshot) - Short, Crime - A cop receives a call and it changes his life forever. Guess the cop never saw it coming. In this information age anything can happen. IQ of the people is increasing. 9 pages - pdf, format 8)

w00t!!! Atlast my script is here.... Thank You...!!!  If anyone reads it, please be kind to comment on it...!!

Rightio. Winshot, 'McLovin' was a character in 'Superbad' - yep, I was up one night and nothing else was on. The character was endearing in a teen-geek kind of way and the movie weirdly watchable & entertaining.

'McLovin' in your script is another character altogether.

Now, I ask this question respectfully. Are you of non-English speaking background? Cause it's evident here unfort.

Your script needs a lot of work, and yet... there are a few lil gems of humour and inventiveness shining through the mire, despite what I surmise is a problem with the English language.

What's your script about? I'm not sure. I'd have to read through again and to tell you the truth it was a lil difficult first time around.

If I'm wrong and English is your native language, then you need to get working on grammar, punctuation, vocab. etc. etc.

And, unless you're filming this you don't need the numerous camera directions.

The last thing I want is to put you off. Your enthusiasm for this being posted lead me to read it. And you obviously love writing - that shows through. And like Superbad, your script was entertaining in a very weird incomprehensible kind of way, but you need imho to get learnin'.

Read scripts here Win' and comment and find a buddy/tutor to assist you with your English. All the best :)



MARK (V.O.)
But later if I missed my chance I will be tired of pulling the shin guts out of my teeth and will have to revel in the most number of video hits on “Youtube” of my running around the track for life of Britney lending her vocals in the background “Oops! I did it again to the joy of others…

So I went to the one place where every kid locks his door prior before they type on “www”, The Internet. It’s a place where random bytes of intelligence float amongst vast oceans of idiocy, and all of man kind in future will commit suicide in a futile effort to repent for creating such a weapon of mass destruction and any joker with easy nack would log on to the internet and google their ipod. My access was easy as Matt was guilty, which everyone thinks you are, Until proven innocent. I learned that access to Matt’s bag tomorrow was the key to his mission. Whatever ghastly thing that might be. Like a sucker I believed it. Finding the truth and the truth alone sets me free.

Quoted from LC Rightio. Winshot, 'McLovin' was a character in 'Superbad' - yep, I was up one night and nothing else was on. The character was endearing in a teen-geek kind of way and the movie weirdly watchable & entertaining. 'McLovin' in your script is another character altogether. Now, I ask this question respectfully. Are you of non-English speaking background? Cause it's evident here unfort. Your script needs a lot of work, and yet... there are a few lil gems of humour and inventiveness shining through the mire, despite what I surmise is a problem with the English language. What's your script about? I'm not sure. I'd have to read through again and to tell you the truth it was a lil difficult first time around. If I'm wrong and English is your native language, then you need to get working on grammar, punctuation, vocab. etc. etc. And, unless you're filming this you don't need the numerous camera directions. The last thing I want is to put you off. Your enthusiasm for this being posted lead me to read it. And you obviously love writing - that shows through. And like Superbad, your script was entertaining in a very weird incomprehensible kind of way, but you need imho to get learnin'. Read scripts here Win' and comment and find a buddy/tutor to assist you with your English. All the best :) MARK (V.O.) But later if I missed my chance I will be tired of pulling the shin guts out of my teeth and will have to revel in the most number of video hits on “Youtube” of my running around the track for life of Britney lending her vocals in the background “Oops! I did it again to the joy of others… So I went to the one place where every kid locks his door prior before they type on “www”, The Internet. It’s a place where random bytes of intelligence float amongst vast oceans of idiocy, and all of man kind in future will commit suicide in a futile effort to repent for creating such a weapon of mass destruction and any joker with easy nack would log on to the internet and google their ipod. My access was easy as Matt was guilty, which everyone thinks you are, Until proven innocent. I learned that access to Matt’s bag tomorrow was the key to his mission. Whatever ghastly thing that might be. Like a sucker I believed it. Finding the truth and the truth alone sets me free.

Yeah! LC, This script I wrote was to film it on spot and it took me just one hour to write and due to lack of budget and the actors I could not film it. There were no edits and this is my first and final draft on encounter. The camera angles you spoke of in the script, was to film the sequences, which unfortunately could not evolve onto the film reels.

English language is not my native language, but I assume I am far better than others in Hollywood. :D  I do mistakes as well, you know. This was the script I wrote when I was frustrated. lol

Also the story revolves around cricket, the dialogue parts where Matt and Rob speak will mean something to readers in the end and when they come back again, and herein, if it is filmed it will blow the minds and make people to watch it again and again as I have in my mind.

The script is about planning to eliminate without having any traces on you. ;)

Thanks for commenting..... And since I did not have the budget, I made a film without spending any money with a still camera..... Here's the link for you...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RfROIUXRTJ4

Thanks for commenting..... ;)  Have fun bro.....