The Rise and Fall of Ava McGown by Rachael Cosgrove - Short, Drama - Ava McGown dropped out of School to become an international journalist. Although her family disagreed with her decision, they couldn't change her mind. With a lot of bumps along the road, will Ava persue her goal or will events change her mind?  24 pages - doc, format 8)

Hi Rachael.

Took a quick look at this.

Your main character's name is misspelled both in the title and your log line.

Also, try to find some decent software, (Celtx is free) and then take a read of some of the scripts on this site for formatting tips.

Hope this helps and whatever happens, keep on writing.

Good luck.

Martin.