Hard To Remember by Jeffrey Sirdashney - Action, Adventure - A teenage girl named Alex has gone through some horrible events in here life which she has repressed over the years in the depths of her mind. But the memories slowly begin to creep back and become strong flashbacks which cause Alex and her family to struggle to stick together and find out what is so hard to remember. - html, format 8)

Hi - formatting seems a bit off - didn't read very much of it due to this - have you proof-read it effectively?

Ex:

ALEX and JESS walk in at a normal pace and continue talking
          while heading towards the building. (more)

          WHILE HANGING UPSIDE DOWN:

                              JESS
                    So what are you doing after school?

                              ALEX
                    Soccer was canceled because of the
                    rain last night, you want to come
                    over and go in the pool?

                              JESS
                    I'll have to ask my mom when she
                    comes to pick me up.

          Jess opens the door to the school and lets Alex walk in
          first.

How can this be?