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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Short Scripts / Chainsaw Apple

Posted by: Don, April 5th, 2011, 10:13pm

Chainsaw Apple by Jamie Burke and Sean Halket (crossfade pictures) - Short, Drama, Thriller - Follow Craig Sutherland as he tries to make his career by doing the ultimate trip, but something horribly wrong happens! 12 pages - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: Forgive, April 29th, 2011, 8:21am; Reply: 1

Hi - this looks like it needs a lot of work - there is a lack of tension in it, as if someone is just giving us a statement of events.

Also, some of the formatting needs adjusting. Didn't quite understand the ending...?

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