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Posted by: Don, May 3rd, 2011, 5:47pm

Use By Date by Sam Pryce - Short, Comedy - Rob is a teenage boy whose mother is having dinner with her boss and husband. Rob is completely until something very twisted happens and Rob is forced to hide the truth which soon becomes hilarious. 5 pages - doc, format 8)

Posted by: dogglebe (Guest), May 3rd, 2011, 9:08pm; Reply: 1

Rob is complete what until something twisted happens?

Phil

Posted by: Eoin, May 4th, 2011, 3:18am; Reply: 2

I didn't get this one. Your formatting seems a little off. I'd suggest loosing the 'credits'.

Posted by: jackx, May 14th, 2011, 3:01pm; Reply: 3

I would read this but its in doc format, need to save as pdf to get many views. Also I don't think your logline should tell us it's hilarious, that's kinda setting yourself up to disappoint.

Posted by: dogglebe (Guest), May 14th, 2011, 5:23pm; Reply: 4

He's posted two scripts on the boards. We should see if he pops in before critiquing his work.

Phil

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