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Posted by: Don, July 3rd, 2011, 11:51pm
Posted by: jackx, July 14th, 2011, 8:36pm; Reply: 1
When Mac says waitr, should be waiter p6
P17. Keep they money sb the
Pretty good, I think the dialogue fit right to the characters. The donkey show seemed a little forced, I think something more inspired and original could take it's place. Other than that not bad for a fan script
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