Mecha by Spencer Paradise - Sci Fi - In a dystopian future, a girl discovers a mighty beast that may help her win a war between man and machine. 120 pages - pdf, format 8)

I liked it. I think it may be better suited for an animated film rather than live action. I only had two big issues with it. One, the dialogue was a bit stiff. Second, some places could have used a little more description.

Thank you for your opinion.  Dialogue could be better.  I do understand that it would be cheaper as an animated film, but serious animated films, which this would be, never work out, so I could never see it as an animated film.