Endangered by Grace Aggrey-Fynn - Drama -  The quest for justice pushes two lives along with others to the edge of extinction in a bid to expose an orphanage that sells girls to adult entertainment centres overseas and another to stop the secret transactions of a construction firm manager. 165 pages - pdf, format 8)

Your script is way too long.  Anything over 120 pages is frowned upon, unless you've made a name for yourself.  Your script is not formatted correctly and a character list is not necessary.  I just scrolled down a few pages.  I have been recommended this book to newbies  (like me) throughout this forum.  I wish I would have checked it out sooner.

http://www.amazon.com/Screenwriters-Bible-Complete-Formatting-SCREENWRITERS/dp/B001TJZOF2/ref=sr_1_5?ie=UTF8&qid=1324947382&sr=8-5

I hope it helps...  :)