Print Topic

SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board  /  Comedy Scripts  /  Level Best
Posted by: Don, October 2nd, 2011, 5:26pm
Level Best by A.E. Darrowby - Comedy, Drama - A young woman addicted to paperback westerns, a father just served divorce papers and an executive secretary in mid-life crisis travel from Omaha, Nebraska to musical Cape Breton Island, Canada where they experience enlightenment in the company of some warm and quirky characters. 112 Pages. - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: c m hall, October 29th, 2011, 11:19am; Reply: 1
A.E. Darrowby, I enjoyed this story tremendously, I can imagine it would be an extremely entertaining film.

Format: there are unusual and unique aspects to your approach to format, it may present problems to readers.

Note: on page 58 the dialogue "You know he lives in that trailer out there" should likely be spoken by Andrew.

Note: page 111, likely opening words should be "Before our eyes".


This is a gorgeous bit of writing, I think, and for any readers who are willing to enter the world of "Level Best" it is well worth the time and effort.  

Since I've read this script in previous forms I know how extensive the edits have been and perhaps am forgiving of the quantity of characters and locations.

Dear gentle readers, when you have time and patience, let yourself be entertained by this script.

To me the characters and the story are delightful.  


Posted by: richardernest (Guest), November 10th, 2011, 1:25am; Reply: 2
I want to thank C M Hall for reading the original version and telling me how I had gone wide astray.  She put me on the right track for the story.  

Also, she gave the script its title.
Print page generated: May 4th, 2024, 6:16pm