The Bell Wishers by Emmett O. Saunders III - Action, Adventure - Two children sharing a family vacation discover a magic bell and a traveling cloak that whisks them into danger on a mysterious island. 179 pages - pdf, format 8)

Read to page 8 will try to read more... formatting overall good. Need more character description.  Also it breaks down middle so half sentence one side of page and rest on other hard to read that way.

Id continuing action through scene like beah then instead of same time the CONTINUOUS.

I would also say it is long avg is 1 min screen time per page. So your acript would be at least 3 houra easily..

Most are between 90-120 max nowadays

Hope this helpa will try to read more bwwn busy lately

FAirly enjoyable romp so far!
Is this a production script or is it being shot?
Would like to listen to the soundtrack while reading so trying to find it on youtube or something!
Daz