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Posted by: Conz, February 6th, 2012, 6:04pm
it's probably just me, mr. inarticulate, but if I read dialogue that doesn't use a contraction, it sounds terrible. No matter what kind of character, it could be a posh British prime minister -- "you are" sounds horrible.
"We are going to go out tonight" - nope, no one talks like that. "We're gonna go out tonight." still a horrible line of dialogue, but at least i can hear someone saying it that way.
More often than now, I read dialogue that doesn't break words down into contractions when I feel they should be.
im a big fan of "gonna" and "wanna," also. "want to" often sounds clunky. Those should be accepted words on final draft.
like i said, maybe it's just me.
Posted by: mcornetto (Guest), February 6th, 2012, 6:23pm; Reply: 1
Some people do talk without contractions - especially non-Americans who are speaking properly.
It's all a matter of who you are portraying.
I use contractions when I have average people speaking to one another. I would not use them if my character was giving a speech. I likely would not use them if I were dealing with well-educated people in a work environment but I might use them for the same people after work hours. It really would depend on the character.
Posted by: James McClung, February 6th, 2012, 6:34pm; Reply: 2
I'm with Michael on this one. It's all a matter of who and what context. I do find myself using a lot of contractions nowadays, especially "wanna" and "gonna." They work quite well in natural, informal dialogue scenes.
Posted by: Colkurtz8, February 7th, 2012, 2:38am; Reply: 3
I third what James and Michael have said.
But I can't help asking why "We're gonna go out tonight" is a horrible line of dialogue?
Posted by: Electric Dreamer, February 7th, 2012, 9:23am; Reply: 4
I tend to let the character dictate the diction.
Though most of the time, I tend to skew towards contractions.
But there's a Southern gentleman in the script I'm currently writing.
He normally doesn't use contractions... unless he gets mad.
I like using changes in speech patterns to reveal character traits.
And tinkering with contraction use is a good tool towards that end, IMO.
E.D.
Posted by: Steex, May 23rd, 2012, 1:16pm; Reply: 5
I find that the majority of Americans, particularly the younger crowd always use contractions.
If I'm writing an older character or an authority figure, I never use contractions.
But whatever sounds good to the writer.
Posted by: ajr, May 23rd, 2012, 3:53pm; Reply: 6
My rule about dialogue - have the inner voice in your head say the line, then write what you hear...
Posted by: tjalex, June 18th, 2012, 1:02pm; Reply: 7
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Posted by: ABennettWriter, July 8th, 2012, 11:12pm; Reply: 9
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