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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Short Scripts / Michael Lee's The Session
Posted by: Don, May 4th, 2012, 6:38pm
Michael Lee's The Session by Michael Lee - Short, Drama - If loneliness justifies an affair does an affair justify attempted suicide or does infanticide better justify attempted suicide? 11 pages - doc, format 8)
Posted by: justwrite, May 5th, 2012, 3:10am; Reply: 1
Posted by: Forgive, May 5th, 2012, 11:15am; Reply: 2
Lot of work needed here - but you've been given some good advice, above, so maybe if you're on the boards, and if you can post on pdf, you'll be on the right tracks.
Posted by: CoopBazinga, May 5th, 2012, 12:11pm; Reply: 3
Hey Michael,
Agree with others about this needing a lot of work, hopefully your reply and contribute because SS is a great learning tool if you use it in the right manner.
Some very good info above, another bit from me would be the title…
“Michael Lee's The Session”
Why not just “The Session”
Though nothing really wrong with it, just don’t feel it’s appropriate unless your Stephen King or maybe John Carpenter. Just a thought, buddy.
Good luck and keep writing. :)
Steve
Posted by: Felipe, May 5th, 2012, 2:05pm; Reply: 4
Yeah, you can't really put your name in the title until you're a household name. Your name has to be a selling point. Otherwise it might be seen as pretentious.
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