Ephemeral (was EphemerA) by Julien Blaecke - Drama - Two victims of the same terrorist attack have to relive their trauma two decades later as their plane is being hijacked. 127 pages - pdf, format

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I was intrigued by the length of your story. I got through the first two pages but you have a lot of syntactical errors you might want to clean up. You do know putting camera angles is unnecessary unless you are having your script produced. Just do your best to describe the scene the way you visualize it. Hopefully readers will grasp what you're trying to convey. Good Luck!