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Posted by: Don, June 27th, 2012, 10:17am
Dexter/Carnival of Blood by John Simpson (themadking) - Series, Drama - Season Seven, Episode One - Debra discovers Dexter's dark secret. The Funhouse Killers bring their traviling horrorshow to Miami, with the FBI's top serial killer hunter in tow. And a dangerous new adversary wants to play in Dexter's game. 68 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Eoin, June 28th, 2012, 9:48am; Reply: 1
Page 11 - 'Debra COCKS THE HAMMER on her Glock and takes unsteady aim'.

The Glock 17 is hammerless.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Glock_17_9mmPara_004.jpg

The scene is far too long at 7 pages, I think you can show the same thing in 3.

Dexter's dialouge seems pretty much on the ball.
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