Smart Phone by David Nelson - Drama - James Rucker is the Intelligence Chief of the most powerful secret organization in the world.  When top level government information is breached from his phone, could the culprit be the woman he has trusted and loved the most? 97 pages - pdf, format 8)

The log-line intruiged me, but looking t the first page ... things are a bit messed up.

I wish people would put relevant information on the title page.

First slug refers to the lobby, but then you've got James in his room - this doesn't make sense.

The reference to Marcela and James is an unfilmable, and needs to be dropped.

Shaking your head normally means disagree, nodding means agree.