The Imbecile by Robert P Kirbyson - Drama - After the ultimate betrayal, a condemned man crawls from the abyss to annihilate his bloodline. 103 pages - pdf, format 8)

I read the first few pages, Robert. Even though the writing is a little iffy, it's still not bad.

Dialogue seems to be a stand out here, very nicely written. I love the way you explain how we're not in America without using a note.

If you're around, pm me and I'll give this a read. :)