Darkness And Men's Eyes by Brad Smith - Drama - A father, a son and brother, one blind from birth, struggle to come to terms with the effects of violence on men. 98 pages - pdf, format 8)

Hi Bradley. This has got two many words in it.

Check the first slug, followed by the first description. There's stuff like the policeman driving a moving car - all needs to be cut down and tightened up some.

You know that you don't actually get the police car to stop, do you?

Good luck with it.