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Posted by: Don, October 4th, 2012, 5:06am
Bricks by Philip Widmeyer Davis - Drama - Set in suburban Ohio, this is a lower middle class coming of age story about how family life is fucking crazy.  119 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: rc1107, October 4th, 2012, 8:47am; Reply: 1
Family life is fucking crazy.

Hmm.  I guess it could work as a logline.
Posted by: PhilipDavis, November 23rd, 2012, 3:59pm; Reply: 2
For whatever reason I didn't think about having to put a log line when I submitted the script. After really over thinking it I decided I didn't care and just typed.

That's what I came up with.
Posted by: PhilipDavis, November 23rd, 2012, 4:06pm; Reply: 3
Also I am changing the script right now, it feels like the ending just cuts off and there's more story to tell. So I'm going to try a pilot and two subsequent episodes which I'll submit once I'm done.
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