Flagged for Removal by Dena McKinnon (paleyellow) - Short, Cheezy Horror -  After a group of pill heads resort to selling organs to cover their habit, their scheme backfires on them when one in the group will stop at nothing to get that last 'fix'. 16 pages - pdf, format 8)

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Here's one of my shorts filmed. The sound was all screwed up on it and it's pretty low qual...but it's the first one like actually completed. :)

First of many for Dena!

Hey Dena,

Well done. A little unpolished, but this wasn't one or two minutes, this was a real attempt at a protracted story.

Glad to see you keeping it hard core. - interesting last shot with the liver. Nice.

More to follow no doubt.

Thanks Bill...

Dena,

Was only able to watch the very beginning because I was on my way out to work but it looks like fun so I'll watch the rest later.

However, if you have the script posted, you should send an PM to Don and let him know that.  He will usually post on the front page if you are a member and have a script for it posted.  

Congratulations Dena!!

I remember being bummed out because no one made any films out of my shorts while it seemed everyone else was being produced. Then the first one was made and shit started happening.  Good luck girl!!  ;) 8)

Hey Dena,

Can't see it for some odd reason. Would you mind reposting the link?

Just a quick question... Is this supposed to be a guy demonstrating how to pour a tequila shot?? Because that's what I just watched ;D I can't find your film anywhere, Dena

Hey Dan,

Just realised about 3 videos down the track the zombie one comes up.


Dena, Congrats, it must be a good feeling the outcome for the time and effort you put into it.

Alex

Congratulations, Dena! Hope there are many more to follow. :)

Congrats, Dena. Good stuff. :)

I haven't actually been able to watch it yet because it doesn't appear to be in the link you've provided but I did just watch a guy pissing from his car in NYC. :-/

Not bad viewing for a Friday afternoon. Well, it's better than work anyway. :D

Weird! I watched the film here yesterday. Saw the comments about the link not working today and thought I'd check why. For some reason there are other vids showing. Maybe you need to redo the video link?

Don't need a vid to tell me how to drink tequila.
Been doing that on my own since high school. thanks. :P

When the short film link's back, give us a shout! ;D

Regards,
E.D.

To be fair, though, those 1800 shot tops are tricky. Or maybe I'm an idiot. But I definitely tequila-ed the hell outta my pants when I had a bottle of that stuff.

Congrats, Dena!

Congrats Dena on the video! - Too bad I couldn't hear the conversion between the two guys that well but overall very nice.

Everytime I come back here there's a different video link. LOL.
We've gone from tequila to organ harvesting?
I guess you can use some Cuervo to sanitize the incision! ;D

Hopefully the actual video will be up soonish.
I'm all filled up on organ killers!

E.D.

Oh Lord! We took the vid down duh :) din't think sorry...will reload tonight! Sorry y'all :) This is my brain on 'too much going on' ;)

Thanks Don for posting.

I finally fixed the link guys ;) Sorry about that.....

Also posted the script....

Hey Dena!

You can't beat pill popping organ harvesters for entertainment! ;D
Have to say the low prod quality enhanced the hallucinogenic tone.

Congrats!

E.D.

LOL Right Brett!!

And the movie wasn't exactly done like I wrote it but oh well :)

Ok for their first attempt and they gave me the parameters and I just wrote them the script one afternoon :)

Fun job ;)

Congratulations! I'm sure there will be many more to come. Best way to get your stuff filmed is to be prolific and I know you are!!  8)

Quoted from Pale Yellow And the movie wasn't exactly done like I wrote it but oh well :)

They never are.

I wished I lived closer to Gainesville...I'd like to learn a lil bout filming myself ;) ...one way to for sure control more of what gets filmed :) thanks Pia.

Damn...that's hardcore shit, huh?  And low budget.  But hey, it's a film, right?

Good job, Dena.

Uh ZERO budget ...all volunteers even the guy that helped with special effects. it was completely free except time.

That part where the guy bites the girl...that was NOT in the script...I dunno why they did that ...not sure. Didn't go with the story ...but anyway...

Almost cool to finally see a work published. I know I was elated when I first saw mine in real video - a real adrenalin rush.

Congrats and good job!

Congrats Dena!

I had some down time at work so I read the script (I will watch the film later. I imagine my cubicle isn’t the best setting to watch this lol).

I loved this one. Totally odd and different to anything I’ve read lately. Characters were wonderfully described and had their own voice even though they were all sleazy, addicts. Your dialogue was fantastic, as always.

Great short. Will check out the film as well.

Oney

Thanks Oney....

The movie swayed a lil from the script...but I'm told that is to be expected. I hope to have another one soon. Someone from Ink is filming my 12 Steps :) yay

And yes, def. not one to watch in the office cubicle :)

Thanks again.....d