Avatar 2 spec by Imran Audi - Sci Fi, Fantasy - A script that explores the oceans of Pandora.  83 pages - pdf, format 8)

783 pages?

That's about long enough for an Avatar sequel! ;D

Methinks that be a typo.

*checks the script*

Ayup. It be 83, for those adventurous souls.

E.D.

Well, it ain't Avatar, but then Avatar wasn't either:



I'm having some difficulty separating your dialogue lines from you action line.

Some of seems okay, but the formatting's wrong, and that hinders the read.

I tried to read it. I can't get through the bad formatting. Which I typically ignore if the story is good. But this one...forget it.