Quoted Text In MacArthur Park, Los Angeles, an Investigative Reporter and others watch a man walk ONTO the lake, meditate and walk away; he returns the next two days affecting lives. SINGLE LOCATION, |
Quoted Text A man who can walk across water in a city park catches the attention of many and changes their lives. |
Quoted Text Sound of high heels clicking on concrete comes from tunnel. Black woman comes out of tunnel and stops. In each hand is a paper coffee cup with white lid and steam coming from the cups. WOMAN IS KEYSHA, LATE 30�S, YOUNGER SISTER OF ARISHA; LOCAL NEWS INVESTIGATIVE REPORTER; WEARS SUNGLASSES; EXTREMELY WELL DRESSED WITH BLACK LEATHER SHOULDER PURSE. |
Quoted Text KEISHA (35) steps from the tunnel, her heels CLICK with every step on the concrete. Attractive and stylish, she steps over to Arisha with cups of steaming coffee in her hands. |
Quoted from dogglebe Try it like this: Quoted Text KEISHA (35) steps from the tunnel, her heels CLICK with every step on the concrete. Attractive and stylish, she steps over to Arisha with cups of steaming coffee in her hands. You need to show things like what her job is. And that she's Arisha's sister. I strongly recommend reading some scripts, here, to learn a little about proper formatting. Hope this helps. Phil |